The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a concept that's been visited before, but I was utterly charmed by the little girl at the end, who mistook "library" for "liberty." Such a sweet message in those last few sentences, and very original!
A traveling library - very nicely done, descriptive, and held my attention throughout.
Neat, creative, interesting, and well written. What more can one want. Also, just a dash of "reading" at the end. Good Job. Well done.
I enjoyed all the characters - it was well done! I'd not seen this done before and didn't know till we got close to the end that it was about a library.
Wow, well done. I love trains. This was written very well. There is one place where another look may have caught the mistyped sentence, other that that, well done.

I loved the little girl's wording. To read is to have the liberty to dream.