The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/07
Oh, this is funny! I love your description of the husband reading the book for the first time, and the wife's utter disgust. Very cute and realistic.

I don't think you need that last paragraph; it feels "tacked on" and despite its lovely message, it detracts from your funny story.

Great dialog and characterization here.
02/02/07
The title got my attention, your story kept it. My lip quivers at the mere mention of this beloved book and I have bells all over come Christmas time because I believe. I agree the last paragraph isn't needed, it's solid without it. Great job!
02/03/07
A comical read that gave me a lift on a dark and dreary day. Thanks! Nicely done, well written, and enjoyed the wit...oh yes, and the read!
Being the wife of a funny guy and the mother of three sons I can SOOO relate! Great story and cute humor!
Really enjoyed this. The title is great, the story entertaining, but I secretly call it "The Battle of the Sexes" for a second title. How true this portrays the difference between men and women.