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Oh, this is funny! I love your description of the husband reading the book for the first time, and the wife's utter disgust. Very cute and realistic.

I don't think you need that last paragraph; it feels "tacked on" and despite its lovely message, it detracts from your funny story.

Great dialog and characterization here.
The title got my attention, your story kept it. My lip quivers at the mere mention of this beloved book and I have bells all over come Christmas time because I believe. I agree the last paragraph isn't needed, it's solid without it. Great job!
A comical read that gave me a lift on a dark and dreary day. Thanks! Nicely done, well written, and enjoyed the wit...oh yes, and the read!
Being the wife of a funny guy and the mother of three sons I can SOOO relate! Great story and cute humor!
Really enjoyed this. The title is great, the story entertaining, but I secretly call it "The Battle of the Sexes" for a second title. How true this portrays the difference between men and women.