The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice story! Loved the way you used the Scripture verse and the word picture of you falling down and your friend helping you up! Great job!
04/12/05
The bible verse truly brings to light the importance of friendship and why God made it a commandment. Hopefully we won't forget the Khalids of the world, that also need a helping hand, but may 'appear' as if they never need it.
04/15/05
I would've liked something that tied the wonderful story of Khalid into the second example. Here we have nameless friends stepping in to help, and it would have been a nice opportunity to reflect how they reminded you of that day of skiing and your friend Khalid. It's a nice application and illustration.
04/16/05
"...Sometimes the fall knocks all the spiritual stuffing out of us..."

So true! And I loved the part about friends lifting each other up in prayer. Excellent points here! Quite a jewel of a read.
04/23/05
No Melanie, you are not alone. Did you ever go skiing again??