The Official Writing Challenge
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Clever idea!

I wonder if the introductory paragraphs are entirely necessary--the "Storybook Cake" idea is strong enough to stand on its own. Very creative.
This is indeed a very clever piece, and I loved the title. I enjoyed the story, but double spacing between paragraphs would have made it much easier to read. I hope that you will continue to write in the creative style. Good luck to you!