The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice job--you've updated the Mary and Martha story, and added some unique modern twists. Well done.
This was great, very well-written and great flow. You did a good job of modernizing the Mary and Martha story, and reminding us that sometimes we need to listen more and be present in the moment rather than trying to be the perfect host.
I loved this "updated" story with the very creative ending.
I like your modern take on the bible story. The ending was also great too. We tend to miss so many things when we simply don't listen.
This was clever - I enjoyed it alot. Good job.
I was smiling all the way through! A creative writing!
Ha! The irony at the end really caught me in the gut. Guess I've been like Marilyn, hoping to win praise for my cooking. Nice work whoever wrote this!
Such an eye-opener! Great description. Thanks for pointing us this way.
I loved this! I'm going to a retreat in May about Mary and Martha and I'm a classic MArtha. You gave this a great update.
Ha! Loved that ending. Great story.