The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely--good job with both rhythm and rhyme, and a wonderful message.
This is very good. Great message, good meter and rhyme. I enjoyed it.
Your use of aa,bb,cc, ryhming in each stanza kept the poem flowing so it rolled off my lips as I read. The poem was musicical to the ear.
You did a great job writing this. Loved the poem and the message. Blessings on you!
So many good thoughts in such a small space! Your poetry always has such great messsages...and always On Target, topic-wise. Loved this one! It flowed beautifully. Good Job!