The Official Writing Challenge
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This has a rhythm to it, unusual for a piece of prose. The dance of Light and Darkness--nice writing.
Super job with a poets touch. I enjoyed the read. My only comment would be I would have a liked to have visual or some characteristic of "David" to carry me thru the story with. But then, a faceless pastor representing what you wanted David to represent was a symbolic way to go to. Anyway, I won't argue with myself any further. A very good entry. God Bless.
I love your story. A great reminder of the battle we all face each day. I saw a shortened version of "This Present Darkness" here. Thank you!
I liked the concept of the light chasing away the darkness - it was very visual. It read almost like a poem in the way you presented it. :)
This is really well done and time-relevant. I am teaching this week on the Light of Christ - I hope you don't mind if I use your idea just a tiny bit. Thank you and God bless. This flows well and speaks so much truth.