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Very nice! :-)

I wouldn't change a thing on this one.

Your piece spoke volumes to me. It was so simple, yet so profound. Contentment is so hard to achieve. It reminded me that I must cease striving in my own life and be still...wait and enjoy this wonderful journey we are all on. Thanks for the blessing!
loved the lung lines and being still... very good
Beautiful I enjoyed this very much.

I always read poems out loud - helps me to concentrate. There are some nice thoughts and lines in here, which I appreciate. The rest is either too deep or too vague to strike a cord in me - which is the sign of a good poet, I think!
Be still
and breathe Him in,

This line made me stop and think and take a deep breath of Him.

Thank you
I too like "Be Still" The very stillness is a time for meditation and thinking of Him. Nice poem.
I really liked this. God bless you.
Love it. It throws one off balance to step forward while looking backward -- too true. And always longing for something yet to come does keep contentment at bay. The conclusion, breathe Him in, be still -- just beautiful!