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11/11/06
Oh wow. I really liked this. It makes me wonder who the woman really was. Was it the patient as an angel? A random member of the hospital staff? There were a few minor flow and/or grammar problems, but as it is 1:30 am here, it may just be me. :) Great job.
11/14/06
Such a great and moving story! This story will haunt me for a long time...the way the doctor feels when a patient slips through his fingers. So beautifully said and so masterfully explained; (one minor error- Savior was mispelled) Loved this story, well done. Kudos!