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Great poem. The rythmn was a little rough in spots, but I love the message!
The rhyme and rhythm was off a bit...but great message and lasting thoughts. Very nice.
What I liked most about this is that it perfectly captured what Christian teachers in public schools do--we show the students a godly life, we pray for them, and we find subtle ways to shine. Awesome poetry.
Very heartfelt - the first stanza was great especially. And what a great message - you did a fine job here!
Loved this! It was funny and enjoyable to read, I think you did a great job!
Realistic! I can see those kids wriggling and watching the clock. And the heart of this teacher shone through.
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