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Very very visaul. Wow! This is a keeper, the author has a lot of talent!
I agree this is a very thrilling piece and is written well. I felt like I was reading a random exerpt from a book. It left me wanting to know more - like who Damian was and why he was after them. Do I see a novel in your future?
Enjoyed the read.
Blessings, Lynda
I enjoyed this very much! It held my interest from beginning to end. A little more background info or details would have made it more complete and even better.
Excellent! I enjoyed this! It really got my heart pumping :)
Ooo, I hadn't read this one yet. I have a feeling there is meaning in the name "Somis"... I enjoyed this!