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I was glad it was a dream. I wondered at the end if she was just going to get dressed and run off in her car, or if possibly she was going to take some time to prepare herself for her day by spending time with God. A good reminder to us to slow down, enjoy life, and take time for God and our families.
This is very thought-provoking. Well done.
Very good writing here. You give us the dream, the meaning and even the fact that the meaning of the dream begins to dawn on her, but you leave us hanging as to whether she will change anything or not.

A good reminder that speeding through life always ends in a crash.
Awesome... I absolutely loved this. It is superbly written and drew me in from the first words. I actually got goosebumps when you revealed the true meaning of the dream at the end, and I pictured those kids sitting in the front seat of the truck. A very timely and relevant message - smoothly executed - well done!