The Official Writing Challenge
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I've had this happen at the Toronto Home Show. It was TERRIFYING. I could identify!! The ending seemed to be a bit tacked on, but I did like the idea that the story obvious was repeated often to the children as they grew up and the positive influence that had on their lives.
Good imagery and great story idea. I got a little lost trying to follow the part where the children actually come up missing, but I liked the story and the policeman as a clown. I'm not sure that the last paragraph enhanced the story. I like it better without. Good effort.