The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the conversational style of this story. Nicely done.
Great story...beautiful message. One this sentence "Having a twelve-story apartment building in the hub of a big city going up in smoke ..." it sounds lke the city is going up in smoke instead of the apt bldg. I liked the fireman's response to seeing everyne clutching their possesions - "No faith in us, eh?". Made me think much deeper about what I put my own faith in.