The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice work! I think you had room to elaborate a little more -- to develop this to give the reader a bigger picture of the garden and both the good and bad fruit. Thanks for sharing! :)
I like the message you were developing here. You cut it too short, however, and left God looking kind of cruel, I think. Hope you work some more on this. Nice concept.