The Official Writing Challenge
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Masterfully written! This is great!
Very nice personalization of the Garden scene. Very well written! :)
I'm not a fan of fiction and rarely read it, but this was touching. Nicely done.
Great story. Can you imagine if someone could have known exactly what was going on that night and understood it all?? Yes, I see you can imagine it - and shared it very nicely with us. Good work!
What a revealing look at His garden from from another perspective. Excellent writing, excellent story. I enjoyed this so very much. Blessings Brenda
I also wonder how many people watching on that night and following really understood why Jesus had to die - what a wonderful perspective, and telling, of this so familiar story in a totally different angle. I enjoyed this very much!
You truly have a gift here that you are definitely cultivating. This was creative and so well done.