The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
Very difficult for a reader to read without paragraph spacing. However, I did what I usually don't do...I read it anyway - and it was very good! Extremely well written and made a very good point! Your anecdote in the beginning lured the reader in... got their interest and then lowered the boom with the point you wanted to make. Very well done. I enjoyed the read, even through the maize of "words without spacing". Smile. Nicely done.
09/10/06
I enjoyed this devotional. You had a nice transition from your slice of life to your application. Hit the space bar a few times and you have a jewel. ;)
What a great message from life's experience! Just add spacing between paragraphs and you have a wonderful object lesson.