The Official Writing Challenge
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I'd like to see this expanded. I want to know the rest of this man's story! You drew me in at the beginning, and didn't let go until the end.
Very tight - like a journal entry, or from a Diary. Cynthia Ozick (sp.) writes in much the same style on the same subject. Well done, chilling.
wow, this is chilling. very well written for subject that is so ugly. good job.
Yes, I would love to know more. This was so well done. One little detail: "dieing" should be dying. Good job.
I spent the first five minutes trying to decipher the first five words and how they are to be read. I never did figure it out;...but other than that..a well written story. Nicely done.