The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good writing here. The symbolism is rich with meaning.
I love the emphasis on how important what we say and what we hear can affect every part of our life and how deceptive the enemy is about these things. The story rings very true and entertaining. Great job!
Very nice story. I like the symbolism of the piper being like Satan and deceiving people into following him into sin. How true that can be in our lives. Nice parallel.
Wonderful tale with a great message. Nice going!