The Official Writing Challenge
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Such a beautiful story of a city prepared for us...and I enjoyed the concept of a melody in the wind. Nicely done.
There are gems hidden in this story, but they may be buried by bulky paragraphs. Pick out the gems here and rewrite this story with a more spread out and leaner look. Invite the reader to come and enjoy with a good lead, a leaner body, and a snappy ending.