The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an effective way to write a devotional--starting with a story and then proceeding to the lesson. Thanks for sharing this.
What I like - I like how well you explained your concept. This is a great devotional. I hope you submit someplace if you don't win here.

What I might change - you already probably saw it - your spacing. Type it out single spaced and then double space the whole thing with extra to separate the paragraphs. We will all be able to read it better and the layout can add to the drama so to speak of the peace!:))
Don't know how to contact you. But answer is "no".