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Gripping imagery. It took my breath.
08/25/06
Awesome!
08/27/06
Very creative. Very moving...and very well done. Great piece of work - and tugs at the heartstrings...I really liked it.
08/28/06
Wonderful structure, breathtaking imagery.
First I added this to my favorites. Now I can say, 'Wow.'
08/28/06
Intersting repetion and beautifully done!
08/29/06
I just LOVE the structure of this - and amazing images. I'd say your free verse has certainly not gotten rusty! So well done!!
08/29/06
Very powerful imagery reinforced through repetition. I especially like how you ended many stanzas:

"A holy life..."
"A sacrifice was nailed..."
"A promise fulfilled..." Well done.
08/29/06
Oh my! This is so well put together. The connections you make here:
"...Three weathered spikes
Driven into hands of healing
Holding feet once bathed in oil...."
pull other pictures into my mind, almost like watching a movie that fades one image into the other. Super job, here!