The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
Such a bittersweet story told and retold since that horrible day for Him, and that Wondrous day for us and for all mankind...nicely done. It touched my heart, deeply - as does the Cross.
Very nicely done. I like that little glimmer of insight into the earthly father/son relationship.
08/28/06
What a clever idea--to write about the young Jesus with a sliver in his father's shop...very moving.
08/28/06
I loved this piece--very creative about Jesus' thoughts and the piece about Joseph was wonderful. Loved how you wove the different scriptures together so well. Bravo!
08/28/06
Very moving and heart-wrenching. A wonderful look into the humanity, as well as the diety, of our Savior. VERY nicely done!
08/28/06
Nice! Nice! Nice! Full of emotion and imagery and creativity! The breath totally left me when I read about Joseph's comment to the boy Jesus about the sliver! That one little paragraph gave this story its uniqueness and sets it apart from ordinary. Nice! Nice! Nice! :)
08/28/06
I won't soon forget this poignant view of the cross!
Masterpiece!