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You had me fooled! An entertaining twist to the story. What fun - enjoyed! :)
Haha, very clever twist.
Wow, I must be slipping. Usually, I am on to a "shrewd" ending but this one did what it intended to do! Very well done. ~L~
Funny and unique. I loved the ending. Very unexpected. Nice job.
Boy, you got me good. Excellent story and twist. Loved it, loved it.
This is such a cute story. That baby sure is intelligent. lol
You had me fooled as well. A clever baby to 'fix' grandma like that. Lovely twist.
What can I say? I loved it! And yes, I was fooled till the end. I mean, the bars should have made something go "click" but you had me so involved in this little schemer that I didn't follow my instincts!!
How very creative! I thoroughly enjoyed your story!
What a trick! What a shrewd surprise ending! Do you know that I let this story clutch my heart...and then "poof", your sly fox ending dropped out of nowhere!!! Clever, to say the least.