The Official Writing Challenge
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Yikes! I like it--could visualize everything right along with Kaylee. Wouldn't we be more avid evangelists if we all had Kaylee's vision? Good job.
I disagree with the above comment, I'd rather have Sandra's vision. Nicely written story and very creative. Good job.
Great job. One of my favs!
Great job on this. Moving, touching. Good flow, good story.
WOW - what a haunting vision. Certainly convicting to me!!! May we all see the lost in this way - we would be SUCH better evangelists if we did!
Very convicting. I like the line, "It's not supposed to feel good." In our culture we're conditioned to only seek what feels good. Much of Christianity has fallen into that trap as well...that Christ came and died on the cross to make my life a cakewalk. Thanks for a reminder of the kind of vision we really need.