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08/10/06
This poem is as light as froth, a perfect example of using poetic language.
08/12/06
This is the best I've read this week. Very nice. You used the word "gossamer" twice so I looked it. "characterized by unusual lightness and delicacy." It fits and so does this poem in all ways.
08/12/06
Nicely done, which is rare in unrhymed poetry and free verse (in my humble opinion); but this was very well written. I enjoyed it immensely.
08/17/06
DeAnna, beautiful and inspirational!
08/21/06
DeAnna,
This is so beautiful and anointed. I am so thankful that He has taken hold of hope for us. We may not fully realize the vision He has for us or the hope may seem illusive, but He has it in His grip where we are held gently.
Blessings and love.