The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a clever piece of work! There's alot to think about...Good work!
Very smart! I enjoyed the creativity here. My only thought though was what do these characters look like? I really did enjoy the story and the message ministered. God Bless.
Creative and crafty take on evilness. Nicely done.
A Very inventive and creative piece of work; however, I have mixed emotions; I don't think man was created for the sole purpose of working for Him - which these Inventors From Hell seem to insinuate...but to be free to think, to love, to enjoy, to laugh, to live - but not just to work. But on the other hand, if it means "work" in breathing; then that's a horse of another color. Very, very creative! And...intriguing! Good job!
Great original angle. Liked it very much.

Great writing! very clever and thought-provoking. Your characterization is amazing, considering the word count limit. This has given me much to think about. Congrats on your Davey!!