The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/06
Interesting article. I would suggest that the second paragraph be divided into at least three:one for Eros, one for Philia, and one for Agape. The three terms should all appear the same throughout the article, meaning that if you are going to capitalize them to make them stand out, then they should be capitalized throughout the entire article. I like your explanation of the three forms of love. I do differ, however, in their strength. All forms of love are strengthened in our lives when we allow God to guide our relationships with others. When He is in the midst, no matter what comes our way, our "love" relationships can stand the test of time. You presented good ideas. Make sure you use spell check also to catch pesky misspellings. :)
This is a good message. I agree about the run on sentences. Overall the whole thing could use a little tightening up. You've got the basis for a pretty good artile here.