The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow
What a romp through so many stories!
Blessings
10/23/21
You've got about 5 stories here. All are exciting. All need to be developed. I would suggest you choose 3 at the most to develop. Two would be better! By having more space to develop, you can pull your reader into the story with a strong hook and using all the senses. Just take the last example... let the reader FEEL the people flowing around you. Let the reader FEEL your heart as you pray - not even knowing why. How did you find out about the dying girl? How did your heart feel when you found out WHY God had you stop and pray. Potential is leaking out all over the place! Focus, focus, focus and pull the reader into one or two of these magnificent examples!!!
Happy scribbling!
10/24/21
Wow! I loved your writing! Thank you.