The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/20
Nice! Very insightful.
A unique entry. I enjoyed reading it.
03/07/20
I guess the Momma was still delighted that her lad even made it hey. Good fun and deeper message. If I was an expert on rhythm (but I not) I’d like to suggest you drop a few words you had in there as I’m convinced you had made the story clear and just a few times they slowed the great rhythm you had established. Cheers.
03/07/20
Wow- what a message you tell!
03/12/20

Interesting, I never knew my mom's parents not my dad's father as they had passed before I was born.
My dads mom, my grandmother was a praying woman. Thank you for your story.