The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/19
Personally, I've never really experienced chronic busyness! (Thankfully! ) I've had busy weeks or busy days, but I feel I have good time management skills. You provided a lot of information to ponder about busyness.
Your opening line caught my interest. I challenge you to squeeze the essence of the facts you are presenting into a flowing read. See if you can stir these thoughts together and give us an ending line demonstrating the squeeze. You've got a great start and I think this is worth developing into a thematic 300 word devotional.