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You've made a good point -even though TV is definitely not the topic of the piece.
I think your article IS on point with tele-VISION. More and more, whatever is on the TV is imparting the "vision" rather than God's VISION for a person. I like the creative angle.
10/13/18
I also like the creative edge here. You did a great job, and I enjoyed this. God bless.
10/13/18
So well done in content and delivery, I enjoyed it.
Blessings~
You developed an interesting opening that came to the desired conclusion - teaching us a needed lesson.

Well written.