The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/18
WOnderful job with the topic.
Well done
Blessings~
Very nice!
02/16/18
I like the the comparison of the two types of baggage. So true!
Nice!
You wrote a delightful picture of the baggage in the first part and even explained how it related to each of us.

The transition verse, quoted here: "For we’d rather endure the pain
of past hurts and intimidations
than releasing the baggage
and knowing “peace of mind." should have ended with one solution. You can add it later. It involves forgiving others as we receive forgiveness from God. Our baggage is then essentially gone.

Nice writing.