The Official Writing Challenge
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Well said!
02/26/17
Your article is well thought out giving several examples to bolster your overall message. I thought you used the word basic too many times though. Next time you may want to look for other words or phrases that would have the same meaning, but not feel so repetitive for the reader. Overall- good job!!
03/01/17
Overall I think you covered the topic. Lots of good ideas. You limited your audience--I speak for myself--not too interested in hair color or women products. It needed a little creativity and a hook at the beginning. You have a rich history. Grab our attention with it. Keep writing you are an interesting person. Share that in spreading the word.