The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 371 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
01/28/16
I enjoyed your family's faith journey. Very descriptive wording about hiding from the neighbor-felt as if I was there. Nice job.

You have punctuation errors, as well as long, run-on sentences. In particular, 5th paragraph. You could have made it easier to read if this information was separated into several sentences.

Overall, great job on topic, and it was an enjoyable read. Keep writing.
01/29/16
I loved this entire piece.
Beautiful message.

God bless~