The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/10
Wow. The lines that really jumped out at me were
Used for the battle of entering into His rest
Free from all works of the flesh.
It is a battle to enter into His rest, isn't it? and I love the line-
The living tabernacle that moves on two feet. That is mind boggling!
This is beautiful. At first I didn't think you were going to mention that only Jesus makes it possible for us to go there, but then you wove into the wonderful fabric of your poem.
Absolutely love this!
Well done.