The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/08
I really like your voice--it's authentic, real, interesting.

Watch out for run-on sentences, and pay a little bit more attention to comma usage.

You're an interesting writer, and with a little polish will be a very good one.
03/15/08
I liked your voice, and your message, very much. A bit of work on punctuation would make this really shine. Keep writing!
03/16/08
Some punctuation and spelling problems that a little Editing could clear up easily; however, you definitely have a good message here - but it isn't exactly on target... Topic Wise. Keep on writing, practice makes perfect!
03/16/08
PS: I think it was a "typo", not spelling, sorry! Peach instead of Preach. It happens to all of us. (*.*)