The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/06
The contrast between the temperatures was very effective.
Nice work. Good imagery. Touching.
This is a gripping, chilling, and freeing poem! I love the ice imagery. It's so very true to the state of our hearts at times. Very skillful and effective writing indeed!!
08/09/06
I love the contrasts -- in fact it reminds me of something I wrote once! I think this is wonderfully done. God bless! :)
08/11/06
This is beautiful writing, exquisite word choices that set a mood for your message. I especially liked the contrast you made between the icy heart and the warm nail-scarred hands. Write on!