The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely, and the last line is a clincher! "Just LET me walk with you." He is ready - we only need to yield and let Him be God!! This one is a confidence-builder. :-)

Great poetic explanation of one of my favorite Bible verses. Very clear, very easy to comprehend and flows nicely. Good Job on topic!
From beginning to ending, this is superb writing. I love this line: "I’ve blazed a trial for you." Then you take the reader on a journey through all sorts of scenarios, indicating our Lord's action on our behalf through each one. I relish well organized poetry, and this is truly masterfully well done. This goes in my favorites!

Wow! Laurie!! I love this poem!! Besides the perfect meter and true rhyme, the message is timeless and oh, so glorifying to our great Creator and Guide. I love the 'blazing a trial' concept. Great writing!