The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely, and the last line is a clincher! "Just LET me walk with you." He is ready - we only need to yield and let Him be God!! This one is a confidence-builder. :-)

07/28/06
Great poetic explanation of one of my favorite Bible verses. Very clear, very easy to comprehend and flows nicely. Good Job on topic!
08/03/06
From beginning to ending, this is superb writing. I love this line: "I’ve blazed a trial for you." Then you take the reader on a journey through all sorts of scenarios, indicating our Lord's action on our behalf through each one. I relish well organized poetry, and this is truly masterfully well done. This goes in my favorites!

Wow! Laurie!! I love this poem!! Besides the perfect meter and true rhyme, the message is timeless and oh, so glorifying to our great Creator and Guide. I love the 'blazing a trial' concept. Great writing!