The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Charming little poem--it practically begs to be illustrated. I like the relationship you portray between the Father and the Son.
07/20/06
I liked the simplicity and flow of this poem. Even children would benefit from hearing it.
Well done!
07/22/06
Wow! This was a great poem. I'm amazed when anyone can fit rhyming words together so beautifully because I often fail miserably. This would definitely be a perfect way to share the Creation story with children.
07/25/06
Delightful poem, and I agree this would be wonderful illustrated or recited with drama. Blessings Brenda
07/25/06
This is simply wonderful!!
07/25/06
Very sweet - and straightforward - as someone said, a child could benefit from this one! I especially loved the last stanza.
I loved the way this flows so easily. Well done!