The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the casual interplay between the two conversants here (husband and wife?)--they seem to know each other's thoughts and to have "inside" jokes.

However, in order for your readers to be "in on" the conversation, maybe you could help us out a bit--may some action in addition to the dialog, so that we know exactly who's talking and why "me" is looking for a job?

There's lots of good stuff here, witty and cute.
Cute title!
I like the title and the message of looking deeper (and that the "meat" of the matter really isn't meat).

Good use of dialogue, but I was wishing there was a little more.