The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
Wow, you made feel as if I were there! "My brother, a humble fisherman from Capernaum, had found his one true calling." May we all find our true calling in Him.
06/03/06
Nice interpretive story, fairly well done. Watch the compounding adverbs...
06/03/06
A well written retelling of the wonderful story! Good job.
06/04/06
Beautiful! So beautifully written that I too, felt I was there. Simon's purpose in life had been given to him early in his discipleship - the day the Lord nicknamed him Peter...meaning "The Rock." Great Write and a fantastic Read!
06/06/06
Liked the different point of view, one that isn't as noticeable in the Bible. Good work.