The Official Writing Challenge
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A nicely written piece about the crucifixion. Indeed, a "strange way to save the world," yet the only way possible. Thanks for sharing.
Well done! Creative approach to our most vital story--HIS! You carried off with punch and dramatic flair.

You might want to comb through and pick off those pesky adverbs; they can weaken your excellent style.

Onward, soldier! Nice work.

I liked the conversational parts, like we're overhearing the crowds, but I think the end kind of distrupted the flow. Maybe make it more like the first part, but from some of those who'd seen Him.
An excellent Read, and one that makes one contemplate the whole story of salvation. Very creative and held this Reader's interest. Well done.