The Official Writing Challenge
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Heartfelt and sad. I think an exchange of dialogue would have been nice - Jadette talling what happened. Watch some words (Jadette looked blanked, should be blank). Overall nicely done with a trueness within.
Powerful idea but we really only see Jadette in her ugliness. For more of a contrast I would have added a flash-back showing how successful she had appeared to be.
It's sad that so many women let themselves get stuck in those kind of traps. Some dialog would help move it along, but a very good start on a very tough topic!
Yes, her friend could introduce her to the One who would give her a Purpose in Life - a great thought for someone who has lost their way; beautifully written except for the "blanked" that should be blank. Very minor...but distracting. Well done.