The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/06
What a wonderful ending--I really didn't see that coming, and that's a tribute to your writing skills...and I feel the same way about FW!

I'm still mulling over the capitalization here; I suspect that you're using it for emphasis, and to a point, it works, but then...maybe a bit distracting? But it could be just a style choice, in which case, go for it.

I liked the relate-able, easy-going voice here.
06/02/06
Love the expression "knee mail." Great read!
I liked your title... A good title grabs attention. A few grammatical errors. I liked your humor throughout your story. Nice job.
06/07/06
I love this, especially the ending. You were writing for me, also. After retirement, church, family, others offer lots of busywork to distract you from your "retirement vocation" purpose. Now I tell folks I could spend a 40-hour week here! (And I don't even recall how I linked to this website, but am I ever glad I did!) Thank you for a delightful story!
06/07/06
How cool -but instead of "End of story.", I think it's just the beginning :)
06/08/06
What a fun read! I enjoyed it! Great work! :-)