The Official Writing Challenge
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This reads more like prose than poetry--would you consider putting in in paragraph form?

I really enjoyed the first stanza especially--you made some great points.
Alot of Common Sense packed into this "prosaic" essay... and so much Truth! Even from a layman's POV, I thought it awesomely written. It holds the reader captive with a much needed modern day message. Well done!
Very well written and so full of truths. Sounds like a modern day prophet. Great job. In Christ's Love,

I like your format. It seems more readable to me, prompting me to linger over specific ideas (that I might miss in a paragraph).

Your message is solid and gives a meaningful contrast between the life of purpose and the slippery slope of the broad way. Thank you for this.
Some powerful images - I loved the "cross-shaped beacon"! some good stuff :)