The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this. For me, the middle part (Satan, Grave etc) would stand alone - clever, funny, and very pointed.
You presented a very good message in a unique way:) I might suggest some spacing between paragraphs and who is taking as it would make it a whole lot easier to read. There were a few shifts in tense as well to watch. Some good dialogue but evry good content!