The Official Writing Challenge
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The prayer is about a sister, but the story is about...I guess I am confused on who or whom this blessing has taken place; but no is a wonderful story with good advice and a great ending.
This was good. It teaches a wonderful lesson by a wise woman. I enjoyed it very much.
Beautiful story, well written from the heart!
Great. I did enjoy this. THe last line - I'm probably stupidly missing the fact that it's a famous quote (or (horror of horrors, an unfamiliar verse from the Bible!!) but either way I think it's genius.
Your main character surely experienced true joy! Thanks for the reminder that God promises to finish everything He starts. Well written story. Blessings, Jo
I was a little confused by the opening prayer...who is praying this? But the story is great, you really showed us this woman's spirit. Lovely writing.
Deb- Thankyou for this very relevant piece. We all know them, I also was one of them. I seek the words to express the encouragement I desire to give! Praise God for His "YES" to your prayer and to mine! God Bless! Pat