The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice. Thanks.
Now if I'll put it into pracitce.
Nice work. Try getting rid of the "as" for paragraph leads, and the piece will get much stronger.
Amen! I CAN do all things through Christ who strengthens me! I really liked this bit of honesty.
This is good. it's written well and the message is great. Watch the opening sentence structure. It was a good opening, but your first and second sentences need a little attention. Geat job.
I enjoyed the voice of your entry. The possiblities that become realities through Christ is the best message to convey to us all, and I thank you for this simply powerful reminder.
Nice message. I relate to the cycle thing. It is hard to change old patterns. God first. Amen!
Good ideas, well thought out and written. May God bless you in your goals accomplished in Him! Keep writing!