The Official Writing Challenge
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Your poetic telling of this story is very concise, but it shows such evidence of God's faithfulness. I liked it.

God bless you.
It took me a while to see the poem! I think if you structure it as a poem it would work so much better. I like that lesson in willingness!
I realized after reading the fourth line that I was reading a poem, which looked like prose. This was a good effort and brought out the story very concisely.